Re-entry


Local: A Quadrille

On returning to another home. Written in the one and only Philly, and inspired by a poetic challenge (read after the break for more!).

City Hall, Philadelphia (photo taken January 2024).
It’s not what it is now
but how you remember it

when you were a local,
the figment of the city

you stitched anew from
a song of American names—

Arch, Walnut, Baltimore,
Spruce, Fairmount, Locust:

threads of the tapestry
wrapped around your heart.

——

This poem was inspired in part by the fine folks at the dVerse Poets Pub. Specifically, it’s a quadrille, or a poem of exactly forty-four words in length centered on a chosen word or topic. The challenge for this week was to write a quadrille using the word “figment,” which explains its presence at line four. Seeing as I managed to revisit Philadelphia—the city where I lived for two years en route to earning my Ph.D. in English (at Penn)—on Tuesday to catch up with some old friends and colleagues, I decided to write this quadrille as a tribute to the Philly I remember, and the one I kept in my heart during my time in Belgium.

Many thanks to Lillian at Dverse for setting this fun challenge, and I hope you enjoyed reading my contribution. Comments, as ever, are more than welcome! 


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  1. rothpoetry Avatar
    rothpoetry

    It is interesting how memories we want to keep have figments of imagination wrapped around them. Love your closing lines.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Thanks so much for your comment! I wholeheartedly agree: I think it’s natural that the imagination works to ‘preserve’ our cherished memories, even when it introduces sensations or events that may not have actually happened. Sometimes I wonder whether that makes poems centered on happy memories more ‘fictional’ than others centered on less fortunate moments.

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar
        rothpoetry

        Could very well be. You are welcome.

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  2. Grace Avatar
    Grace

    That is so true, how you remember it vs now. I am always sad to see modern development over a simple landscape. The memories of the past live on.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Couldn’t agree more with this—even if Philly’s landscape has always been colored by modern development in my experience, I still find myself longing for the version of it that I remember. It’s still lovely to visit, though!

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  3. lillian Avatar
    lillian

    I love this quadrille and your explanation at the end of it! Oh my, I so understand what visiting a place we spent much time in, albeit years and years ago, can be like. We visited my childhood home town when I was in my 60s….hadn’t been there in decades. Just one example of how you can never step in the same river twice…..the church I grew up in and remembered as being so huge, with a rock grotto altar on one side of the church that always seemed so mysterious, hushed, and holy…..on the visit back the church seemed so small! and to my chagrin and I’ll admit, sadness, the “rock grotto” was made of some kind of plastic wall material to simulate rock. I still loved my visit but some of those memories, I wish I could have kept even if, in comparison to the reality of today, they would have been figments of my imagination. Thanks for posting!

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Thanks for this lovely, beautiful reply! I understand completely the shock you must have felt when you revisited your hometown: such a strange feeling to see how objects and structures that have always had the same size never seem to retain their scale the way you remember them. I imagine this is a consequence of the “figmented” nature of memory, the idea that we’re always reshaping the concrete world to hold the weight of newer experiences, newer connections.

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  4. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar
    D. Avery @shiftnshake

    “It’s not what it is now
    but how you remember it”

    That’s the way, isn’t it? This snapshot of your remembered city is well done. I like the stitching and the threads of tapestry.

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Thanks for these lovely and generous comments—they reflect the fun I had in writing this “snapshot,” as you rightly put it, of the Philly I came to cherish!

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      1. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar
        D. Avery @shiftnshake

        I have found quadrilles to be fun to write and a good size for a snapshot.

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    I have not lived in that many places, but it is soon 24 years since I moved away from the city where I was born, and the last time I were there I reflected on everything that had changed (and what remained the same)

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    1. csquaredetc Avatar
      csquaredetc

      Interesting! If I may ask, what were the most surprising changes or similarities you found?

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